Category: Fiction

  • Squish squash scribble

    Happy Easter, to those of you inclined that way.


    Crash-testing chocolate eggs
    !

    More egg science.


    And as if that weren’t enough, it’s time to play first lines! These are the first lines from everything in progress.

    All the Leaves on Mars: “Whisper-thin sheets of stainless steel piled to the ceiling, compulsively stacked, impeccably organized.”

    Gray Lady: “The sky was gray, as smooth as if it had been airbrushed, the same shade as the dishes she stacked in the matching cupboard.”

    Oyster: “I’m going to find a blue one.”

    Stars Move Like Clockwork Across the Sky: “I spring up, spinning to orient myself. Gravity, atmosphere, and that most significant detail: a quarter-moon floating enormous in the night sky.”

    A Very Werewolf Christmas (Working title ONLY): “Snow swirled glittering in the streetlights, stinging my cheeks.”


    If nothing else, doing this prompts me to polish my titles. It also reminds me that I like these ideas, and want to finish them.

    Reading over these also shows me that my sentence-craft has improved in the past year. That’s encouraging.

    Or rather, I knew it had, but I can see that in practice.